My Lovely Pekanbaru

Pekanbaru is the capital of Riau Province. It is placed on the middle of Sumatera. It is about 600 kilometres square. The original ethnic of this province is Malay. But nowadays there are many other ethnics which have been settled at this town, such as Javanese, Minangnese, Bataknese, even Chinese. They all are mixed and become the inhabitant of this town.

Pekanbaru is the town where i was born. It is a nice and clean place. I spent all of my academics there so that i know a lot about it. First, let's talk about the favorite places where i often visited. As a youth, i often visited the fast food restaurants. One of the restaurants which i often visited is "Batagor Kang Uus". It is placed in the centre of the city on Ronggowarsito Street. Because of its strategic area and also its delicious menus, it is always full of costumers. That's why when i go back to Pekanbaru, i absolutely do not forget to visit it, especially to eat Batagor. Its Batagor is very delicious. The other restaurants and food courts which should be visited are "Mie Ayam Ronggo", "Bubur ayam Ronggo", "Es Rumput laut Prambanan", "Bakso&Miso Super", "Pis Burger", "Bakwan Sumatera", "Baung Restaurant", "Pondok Patin", and many other places that you can eat while hanging out. Second, the favorite places to hang out. There are many places which can be visited, such as Plaza Sukaramai, Ciputra Mall, Pekanbaru Mall, SKA Mall, Alam Mayang where you can do fishing and get relax, "Pasar Bawah" where you can buy something good but cheap, "Hoki 88" where you can play pool and bowling in a comfortable place, etc. Third, the academics. Just like in other cities, in Pekanbaru there are aso elementary school. high school, and university. The education in Pekanbaru can't be underestimated because there are many achievements that have been reached by the students of this town. For example, some students from my high school lately passed the international physic olympiad and had won two gold medals. It's very fantastic. One of the students of my highschool lately also became the best speaker in a debate competition in London. That's also fantastic. Although Pekanbaru is not a big city but it's potential is can be competed with other big cities. I'm very proud of my hometown.

Thanks for posting, you need to be focus on your target reader, and your writing is influenced by spoken language. Will discuss this matter in class.