bandung city

I've lived in Bandung for almost 5 years. Before that,,I lived in Jakarta. But,,I was born in Bandung honestly. So,,I can proudly say that I'm a Sundanese people. Since I moved here,,I've got into this wonderful city.

Bandung is the capital city of West Java. As a newcomer,,maybe I can't tell you a whole thing about Bandung. But,,you all guys know that Bandung is also called "Paris Van Java". Why? You know,,there's no doubt that Bandung has attracted many people with its beauty just like Paris. Bandung was a clean,,beatiful,,and peaceful city. But now,,you can see that Bandung has contaminated by many pollution since Factory Outlet was built in this city. Sometimes I feel so disturb wuth this crowd because it causes a disaster traffic jam. There's no peaceful anymore. There's not much big trees anymore. Bandung isn't clean anymore.

There's so many Factory Outlets here (you know,,Factory Outlet or we can also call it FO,,is a place that sell many kind of fashionable clothes). FO is so booming because they have good quality and cheap price. FO is one of the reason why many people visit this city on the weekend. Most of the visitors are from Jakarta. They like to spend their money to shop in Bandung. One of the most popular FO in Bandung is Rumah Mode which is located in JL.Setiabudi. Beside that,,you can find many FO too if you go to JL.Dago,,JL.Riau,,and JL.Setiabudi.

Bandung is also well-known with its foods. The food in Bandung is very delicious and the price as usual,,very cheap. If you live in Bandung,,your won't starve here. Because the foods won't be dissapointed. Kampung Daun,,Batagor Riri,,and Bakso Akung are some place that i recomend to you if you want to taste the touch of Bandung. But,,don't get surprise if you have to wait for a couple minutes if you go there,,especially on the weekend. There will be a long queue.

Well,,maybe my essay is not sattisfie your curiousity about Bandung. But,,there're my knowledge about Bandung city. Hope you enjoy it. Bye!

Thanks for posting, you need to be focus on your target reader, and your writing is influenced by spoken language. Will discuss this matter in class.